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Finally finished :iconrlytearplz:
I don't remember when I had so much fun with lighting/shading ;-;


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Hideki Shiruchi *miya-cchi

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:iconkikimenia:
What I really loved about this was the softness (especially that gown/dress she was wearing!!!) of the subject you portrayed and how their beauty was enhanced by the palette you chose, the background, and where you placed the light source. You did indeed a terrific job shading this vision. It's stunning! Angel is a fitting title :) The texture of her hair contrasted well with the clouds (or is that a wing?) and her skin. You also captured her expression very well. My favorite thing is are the roses on her dress. However, there seems to be something off about the way she is twisting around. Her body is positioned perfectly up until the waist, where it seems like you switched from a back view abruptly to a side view (check your proportions, maybe?). It might just be the way you draw people but it nagged me a little. Also, there seems to be another light source coming in from the bottom right of the picture, since there are more rays slanting in at a different angle than the source in the background. That subtracted to the impact a bit. But overall, good job! <3
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The job you did on shading and creating the transparency on the cloths is absolutely phenomenal; don't give up working on that, it's EXCELLENT work.
In addition, the work you did on the sky and clouds is fantastic, and the way you manipulated the cloud showing above her left shoulder is beautifully done; allowing it to look like a wing added a great touch to the overall feeling of the picture.
The addition, as well, of the falling feathers/petals also contributes greatly to the flow the the work, allowing it to guide the eyes from the forefront to the main focus (the face and background region); both of which you did masterfully, and only accentuates the idea of the cloud being an angel wing.
The only qualm I would say with this picture would be the angle of her arm; the twist that it has is semi-unnatural, and seems as if it would be forced into that position. Other than that, her physical layout is fantastic, showing a soft figure, but possessing more character and personality than just being someone/something to look at.
-I think she deserves a good back story :heart:
Overall: 9.9/10, I wouldn't harsh too hard on the arm because it's not a major focus (other than the hand being a focal point on the visual movement), and because it doesn't detract from the beauty of the piece at all. Excellent job.
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CreatorXM Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2015  New Deviant Hobbyist Artist
I really like your idea of making a cloud look like wings...
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:iconpiccusia:
piccusia Featured By Owner May 21, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
z tej pracy bije taki blask, cudnie wyszło ci to oświetlenie :love: i bardzo mi się podoba jak ta chmura po prawej imituje jej skrzydło- fajny szczegół! :iconlazyclapplz:
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AnkokuRaven Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014
Absolutely watching you for this
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:iconbellqo:
BellQo Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
you are awesome!!!!!
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:iconkatlynashe:
KatlynAshe Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013
I totally love this picture.  The lighting from top to bottom is beautiful.  And the angle wings "hinted" through the clouds is both clever and interesting.  Definitely one of my new favorites!
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:iconmiya-cchi:
miya-cchi Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you so much! ;u;
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:iconsunny-chaan:
Sunny-chaan Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
That... is so beautiful :') I can't find words *_*
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Kohaya7Kae-13 Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is one gorgeous drawing, I'm in awe!!!!! *////////*
so so beautiful! I love her pose, the shadings, the color and the background and that wings like cloud thingy, so pretty!
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:iconmiya-cchi:
miya-cchi Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you so much ;3; <3
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:iconnicksfluffyshit:
NicksFluffyShit Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Her face and the background are like out of a dream! :3 Awww...
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:iconacetrooper07:
AceTrooper07 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013
great work!!
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:iconcyndhis:
cyndhis Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2013  Student General Artist
omg omg this is a very beautiful drawing! the angle and the colors are perfect!
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:iconcrazy-aika:
crazy-aika Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
The point of view and the colors are so lovely! >w<
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:iconlatarenka:
Latarenka Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013
Sliczna twarz, przepiękne niebo.
Anatomia tylko zła... ręka, dziwny skręt biodra. Ale to w sumie strasznie nie przeszkadza, bo te niebo cudne. 
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miya-cchi Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ręka faktycznie dziwnie wyszła, chociaż skręt wydaje mi się ok (sprawdzałam na sobie i jest to możliwe :XD: )
Dziękuję c:
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ShortNAdorable Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013  Student General Artist
this is so beautiful i just cant ... even.... <3333 :iconloveloveplz:
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:iconhere-and-faraway:
here-and-faraway Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013  Hobbyist
This is gorgeous. I love how the clouds look like wings.
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Terrokus Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013
Niesamowicie piękna praca:) wywarła na mnie ogromne wrażenie a spojrzenie tej piękności zachęca mnie i motywuje do poprawienia swych umiejętności ^u^ dziękuję.
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:iconmiya-cchi:
miya-cchi Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Cieszy mnie to bardzo ;w;
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:iconmikaehei:
MikaeHei Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
OMGOMGOMG TWOJE PRACE SĄ TAKIE PROFESJONALNE *A*//////// :iconletmehugyouplz:
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:iconmiya-cchi:
miya-cchi Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Dziękuję ;///;
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:iconvikami:
Vikami Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013
Cudowna praca, naprawdę zachwyca :iconclapplz:
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:iconmiya-cchi:
miya-cchi Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Dziękuję! :iconrlytearplz:
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:iconvikami:
Vikami Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013
Nie ma sprawy jest naprawdę przepiękna , zresztą jak twoje wszystkie arty
:heart:
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:iconrilguia:
Rilguia Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013
So lovely!! I like how you drew the sky and her "wings" also the dress :love:
so beautiful! >v<
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:iconmiya-cchi:
miya-cchi Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you >w<
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Rilguia Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013
No problem! =D
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SeikoVanM Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013  Student
Genialna *O*
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miya-cchi Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Dziękuję *v*
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:iconseikovanm:
SeikoVanM Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013  Student
Proszę bardzo! :hug:
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:icon2shjan:
2SHJAN Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Awesome!
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AkiraxAngel Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I never saw a very creative artist on dA till I saw this pic..That kind of imaginations...
It's just like a charm...I can never stop stare on this pic...
I even can never say how I love it and how it's one of the best...

*clap for u* you are super mega pro artistic artist ,...!!\\and u are actually more
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:iconmiya-cchi:
miya-cchi Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aww, thank you soooo much! ;A; :hug:
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AkiraxAngel Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're more than welcome dear..!!
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Basket-Of-Fruit Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013
I want to draw like this someday. It's stunning
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:iconmeri-mayalu:
meri-mayalu Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013  Hobbyist
omg the sky.. the colours, your shading, colours, everything is just so beautiful!
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Yennineii Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
omg to jest takie bardzo bardzo śliczne ;_; bardzo podoba mi się jak pracujesz z cieniami i poswiatami i tymi wszystkimi fajnymi efektami takie asdsadsadsaf me gusta. I to chmurko-skrzydło jest takie fajne ze aaaaah;;;; <3
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miya-cchi Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Dziękuję ;u; <3
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POPTART117 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
She's so purrrrdy!!!!! :3
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:iconthettruth:
theTTRUTH Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013  Hobbyist Interface Designer
Amazing work.

But there is one question I'd like to ask - what software did you use drawing this or did you do it by hand?
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:iconmiya-cchi:
miya-cchi Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I use paint tool sai
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Vyndicare Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013  Student Digital Artist
This is highly impressive. I love it
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NiGHtsBeta09 Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013  Student Digital Artist
This looks amazing... The lighting is beautiful, the character is cute, and the cloud-turned-wing is pretty clever. Nicely done. :meow:
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KlarkKentThe3rd Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013
This is pretty kawaii, but... something is wrong... don't know what.

By the way, no one would twist their hand like that for no reason.
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:iconmiya-cchi:
miya-cchi Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
but I would... :XD:
ok, I know, this looks kinda weirdo
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KlarkKentThe3rd Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013
I would too, in a martial arts form (Wu Tang #3)

Her anatomy is strange; the legs are shown from the front, the waist from an angle, and the shoulders from another angle still.
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